Week 10

After the critique of the two page layout, Ive decided to make some changes. Page 2 is going to stay the same but I'm going to tweak the 3rd page a little bit. For the 'craft, composition and concept' I plan on making them bold and a little bit bigger to help the body of the text fit with the page. I'm moving the title "Margarita" over to the right to get rid of some of the black negative space. A couple people said that the negative space between the text is too big which I agree so I plan on moving that around and adding my name to the layout. As far as the pull quote I like how it looks and I think if I take away the black box it's just going to create more negative space which I don't need so its probably going to stay. The last thing I'm going to try is to add a scratchy border around the black boxes to try and match the artwork.